self evaluation

1. What score do you think you deserve?

I think I can got 1 points. My body paragraphs are not logical more than I expected.

2. What did you do well?

I think I chose my resolution well. My resolution was interesting for me and I can find lots of resources that fits for my resolution.

3. What could you have done better?

I think I should find more resources. My resolution has lots of resources, however I think first draft's resources were insufficient more than I expected.

4. Which part of classical argument did you use the best? 

I think I was good at writing Introduction. I think my introduction is attractive to audience who saw my first draft.

5. Which part of classical argument did you use more poorly?

I think that I should wirte more reasons about my resolution. My body paragraph is not much logical and it's not persuasive to audience. Also, my refutation and concession is very weak. I think opponents are not be persuaded about my reasons.

6. What's your strategy to make your second draft better?

I should find more resources to supply my body paragraphs, and I should write my body paragraphs more logical. If these things are done, my second draft will be more persuasive than the first draft. Also, I should write my refutation more persuasively to convince oppoents more. I will do my best.